What do you think of my intro to my book of 23 pages long?

he turned to her ever so slowly with a grin and said i think not that you were out last night alone.she then said back,you know i love you and wouldnt cheat on our marriage.he at that moment showed the picture taken of her and the other guy kissing.she cried out,oh its true but i was thinking of us.i felt that he could give me support to aid in our marriage.youre never there for me juliette.matilda he shouted,i want a divorce.she begged him not to and he said very calmly well then i want you to pack your things as we can be married still but not live together.ok but where do i go to live she said?with him he replied.come back to me when you arrive to your senses he uttered.she left and called him up but to no avail.he soon visited her at the house of the cheater and said if you leave him now ill take you back.but you told me to live with him she said when you forced me to leave.but i was testing the marriage he says and with a stalwart walk picked her up and whisked her away on horseback as its in the country.they soon began to repair their lives.they went to mcdonalds and had big macs and fries.she said am i really sensuous still to you juliette?yes matilda but only as long as you dont defy me like that again.will you please eat another big mac after youre finished with that one he said?why as ill get fat she argued?gesturing in a polite show of hands towards her he replied yes so you will be no longer desirable among any man ever again.but some men like big women she debated?and what if you decide you wont want me either she says?well cross it when we get there my love.meanwhile as the strawberry shake shes drinking rolls down her lips they engage in a kiss.i love you he said and i love you she said back.upon leaving the restaurant they went bowling.why on earth are we here she says?because i have something to show you darling.he pulled out the trophy of his 19 wins in tounament play and says to her,matilda while you were off with someone else i was busy bowling and now ive become the best in the league.i did it for us and with a smirk she replied,bowling!yes and will you be my partner he glimmered?yes but i hate to bowl and aint very good said she.well i hate you cheating on me he prolaimed.she sobbed.its ok juliette whispered as he caressed her hair.ill teach you to become good at it.will you she said in jubilee?yes and from now on why should you order soup when you have steak,referring to himself and not the actual food,waiting at home for you dearest matilda?i have 1 rule she said.what is it my lovely he said while sipping on the strawberry shake she hadnt finished.i want next time to goo to burger king as i like the whoppers better!just as long as you stop with your whoppers he laughed.she asked him why dont they stay at home and eat the next night.she made him spaghetti and overly saucy as he liked it.he made the mistake of wearing a white shirt.she sipped champagne and said,are you upset that theres no meat?yes but well get through it allright.she gasped to him in fear,juliette im not very good of a cook now am i dear?yes you are and theres always mcdonalds he announced in a roar.they shared a giant kiss.in a bold leap he grabbed her and they kissed some more.but darlingest juliette,i said burger king. me the name of my book is called- into another mans arms and out of them too